Slash Drabble #2

[tefnut]

Second story in my Jack/Daniel slash drabbles serie. From Jack's POV. I hope I can create a coherent serie, keeping the same POV and focusing on the evolution of Jack and Daniel's relationship. Rating: PG (for now).

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#2. Of Sparks and Fire.

Almost a brother. Almost my son. Surely my best friend. He is all that, and he could be more.

Firewood cracks and lights his glasses with sparks. He is chatting with Carter in this language made of big words, small chuckles and bright grins only they can understand.

Every now and then he looks at me. An evil glint flares up in his eyes; its intensity outmatches the flames of the campfire. He smiles this sly smile of his, and turns back to his twin.

Yes, he could be more. If only I allowed it. If only he wanted to.

The same on my website

Comments

[scrollgirl.livejournal.com]

Ooh, very nice! I especially like "this language made of big words, small chuckles and bright grins only they can understand." Because, really, that's such a wonderful way to describe how Sam and Daniel often interact, especially when they've got their brains in gear.

Btw, I think you have a small typo. "He smiles this sly smile of him", where I think you meant "his".

[http://users.livejournal.com/tefnut_/]

Thank you! I actually blushed on reading your comment. SG-1 is blessed with relationships so rich that you could write encyclopediae on them. Gotta love these guys.

Oooops that was not a pretty typo. I fixed that. :-o